Into the Fire

Can you see them? . . . Fatal Illusions

This week’s CFBA Tour opens with Fatal Illusions, the first novel by Adam Blumer. You can check out Adam’s writing experience besides his degree in print journalism from Bob Jones University on his blog or website. Congratulations to Kregel Publications for daring to produce a first novel which runs several pages past the normal fare offered by today’s publishing.

Having said that, this is still very much a first novel even with Adam’s versatile writing credentials. The story was speckled with clichés and the over-explaining by an author who doesn’t want to leave out anything for the reader to miss. Believe me, I’m speaking from experience.

Haydon Owens fancies himself the next Houdini. He’s studied every piece of literature written about the fascinating escape artist. Haydon practices his magic and plans his spectacular feats which he’s sure will amaze a contemporary audience if he can just secure a good gig. However, there seems to be a few interruptions which demand his interventions. One of those inconvenient and outrageous situations is a young girl by the name of Erin Walker whose testimony in court about his parents’ commission of a crime lands them both in jail. Once Haydon remedies his vengeance, he is alarmed to find Erin just won’t stay dead.

Detective Chuck Riley faces retirement without having caught the serial killer nicknamed the Magician Murderer, and the dissatisfaction follows him from Cincinnati to Florida. When he’s made aware of a signature murder in Michigan, his wife urges him to go and get the killer so he can spend his retirement days in peace.

A happily married associate pastor whose goal is to provide meaningful counsel to needy members of the large church where he’s employed learns one of the married women he’s counseling has a thing for him. She creates havoc in his and his family’s life forcing them into a temporary move to a remote location in Michigan far from the bustle of their home in Chicago.

The pastor’s wife, Gillian, is still suffering from the stillborn death of their twins, a boy and a girl. Her teenage daughter tries to console her whenever she notices her mother’s down moments. With the craziness inflicted upon their lives by the lunatic woman pursuing her husband, what little strength Gillian’s managed to hold in reserve from her grief dwindles and morphs into all out bitterness toward and distrust of her husband.

This is a “Christian” novel from start to finish which winds up preaching. A lot. Gillian drives me nuts, okay? She’s another character whose grief is displayed in obsessive conduct entwined with resentment and bitterness. I could not develop any affection for her, and a large portion of the story revolves around her state of mind and her self-revelation. She vacillates between shrew and “typical” Christian doing all the “right” things. The only real passion she possesses is conveyed through her love for her dead children. The final scenes in the novel seemed totally out of sync for her, although I realize the author intended (or I think he did) to portray that “mother bear” instinct.

As with many first novels, we writers often try to pour more in them than they can hold. I’m sure Mr. Blumer’s next novel(s) will present a tighter story with less preaching and clichés, more meaningful character depictions, and another good story. The story itself is quite good, interesting even, and if it wasn’t for the heavy insertions of explaining “Christian” conduct, thought, and principles and a less than desirable character in the forefront, Fatal Illusions would have been a better book.

Once again I must emphasize that the average reader who enjoys suspense will most likely not consider these elements as flaws.

http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0825420989

Father, I pray you would continue to supply the stories you have for Adam to write. Help him to continue to follow the plans you have just for him. Bless his efforts to honor you. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

Sunday's Offerings

As for man, his days are like grass,
he flourishes like a flower of the field;
the wind blows over it and it is gone,
and its place remembers it no more.
But from everlasting to everlasting
the Lord's love is with those who fear him,
and his righteousness with their children's children--
with those who keep his covenant
and remember to obey his precepts.

Psalm 103:15-18 (NIV)

Free . . . for All

Saturday is Independence Day. In spite of the current efforts to destroy this nation as we’ve known it, we are blessed to live in this wonderful country. Blessed by the freedom outlined in the documents which until now have been held sacred to our government. Often a struggle to uphold but their importance and common reason should never be questioned. The writers hoped for the best for and from mankind and wrote them accordingly.

Leadership in this country has turned from a majority who strived to do the right things to those who seek to implode every value, every moral, every worthwhile provision of our Constitution.

Those who do this are responsible for the murder of 46 million babies since Roe v. Wade became a reality 35 years ago. They defend barbaric procedures which include murdering a viable child by piercing his brain with a sharp object. Who can do such things?

Those who do this seek to pair men with men and women with women and call it justifiable marriage. We see films like Bruno which are filled with perversions wrapped in a comedic style. We see frilly men and manly women taking up their opposite roles within same sex relationships.

We see those who covet material things from anyone who has what they don't. They “deserve” the same “things” and privileges even though they’re unwilling to work for them. They agree that those who have them should have to “pay” for their success by being taxed exorbitantly.

We see so-called scientists selling their souls to testify to fabricated climate issues when they know it’s all junk science. The “green” thing is a joke and those promoting it are in it for the money—at least those who know it’s all a step backward from today’s modern technology. They’ve learned it’s all three times more expensive to produce than to use this country’s natural resources and to incorporate nuclear energy, and they know it will never produce what they profess, lowering the standard of living in this great nation while raising the costs of all energy.

We see those who enjoy the pleasure of all this freedom but refuse to recognize that lives were and are given to preserve the freedom they seek to change. They ignore the value of fighting for what is right and true.

There are those who campaign against the One who gave His life that they might have real freedom. Every day. Jesus Christ provides freedom for all. Salvation is found in no other name, no other way. God is love. He is also just. He gave His Son to pay for true freedom, both for now and for eternity. To cover the sins of all who would seek Him. Resurrection Day is the real Independence Day, and it’s available: Free . . . for all. Price paid in full by holy Blood.

Thank God you live in a country that so far has yet to imprison those who follow Jesus, those who seek real freedom. May you celebrate your 4th of July in the embrace of the God who loves you. Jesus is the same yesterday, today, and forever. He waits. For now.

Maranatha. God, bless the United States of America. Without your blessing, mercy, and grace, we will cease to be the nation created in your honor by your principles. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

"Public Enemies"

There’s just no better way to glamorize a gangster than to put Johnny Depp in the starring role, dress him up in period garb, put him in the most stylish and specially made fastest cars of the era holding a machine gun on running boards, and give him some dynamite lines. Perfect.

I assume this story of John Dillinger takes some liberties with historical accuracy, but who knows being as much of his high crime, depression-era bank robberies took place in the seemingly always gangsterized city of Chicago.

Directed by Michael Mann, it’s an action movie with a heart. Special Agent Melvin Purvis, played by Christian Bale, is assigned the daunting task of capturing or killing John Dillinger after he escapes from prison, evades police and multiple Bureau agents, and robs a bunch of banks. Bale’s portrayal of the no-nonsense, confident yet humble Purvis, giving him a heroic approach to the formidable commission is understated and well done.

Charming the lovely Billie Frechette (Marion Cotillard), a coat checker who falls in love with the dashing gangster, Dillinger comes for her in spite of her warnings to stay away because she’s being watched. Thinking he can put them up in an old safe place, Billie is captured inside the hotel and Dillinger has to speed away. Billie refuses to give him up, giving a fake location which sends the feds on a wild goose chase and infuriates her interrogators.

Their love is for real and outside of Billie only one of John’s friends remains true to the end. It isn’t until John reluctantly hooks up with Baby Face Nelson on a job that things begin to deteriorate for him. Betrayal ends his “career”, and Billie seems to be the only one who knows his life will come to a bad end until he senses it’s close.

There’re a lot of gangsters and G-men in this film to keep track of, and it moves fast most of the time. The R-rated film is quite clean considering its subject matter, and the romance is low key but essential to establishing the character (I know: he’s a gangster, for crying out loud!) of John Dillinger in this story. I’ve seen some PG-13 rated films far more offensive than "Public Enemies".

Some reports label Dillinger a folk hero for robbing the banks the common people held responsible for The Depression. This particular movie plays that up to establish an empathetic “hero” who doesn’t relish the killing and prefers to just get the money and zoom away in “One minute and 40 seconds. Flat.”

There’s a bit of melodrama at the end, but, c’mon, it’s a movie, and in this case it’s just right. Good film. I loved it. I'll be seeing it again soon. And, yes, I’m a Johnny Depp fan.

Father, you know my prayers. You know my heart. You love more deeply than I ever could. Your desire is to bring the lost to Jesus . . . before it’s too late. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

Well hidden . . . Exposure

Brandilyn Collins introduces another fascinating tale in Exposure to succeed her previous stand alone novel dark pursuit. We’re introduced to Kaycee Raye who writes a column about fear: people’s worst fears, overcoming fears, standing strong when fear encloses you in its piercing grip. However, since her own fears remain longstanding from her childhood recollections of a paranoid widowed mother and seem to have flared into flame since the death of her dear friend, her helplessness to fight against her fears is once again amplified.

Captured in throat-drying reality by the author, we can more than sense this young woman’s obsessive compulsion to be afraid. When the first freaky episode with a camera in Kaycee’s home terrifies her and sends her speeding to the police station, she fears even more for her sanity when the attractive policeman returns with her to check out her home where not even the camera is found, let alone anything else to prove it was there.

Interwoven with Kaycee’s terror is the story of a young couple with a sick preschooler. Somehow through the agony of trying to take care of her illness, the young father who works at a bank gets desperate and finds himself in the middle of a circumstance he can’t control.

Included along with these two scenarios, Kaycee’s deceased best friend’s nine year old daughter, Hannah, is struggling with her father’s new wife and step-family. She wants to leave her home and come to live with Kaycee. When Kaycee won’t allow her to do so because she knows the little girl must learn to cope with the changes in her family dynamic, Hannah decides to run away and heads straight for Kaycee’s house in the dark of night.

That’s all of the plot line I’m going to tell you. I really think Brandilyn does a masterful job of twisting this story. For one thing, we’re never truly sure Kaycee is alright, that her experiences are in fact real until there’s an undeniable piece of evidence, even though it fades from “exposure”. The dots are all there, but we can’t quite connect them. We feel for the heroine because she is so crippled by her fears, and the farther the story advances, the more understandable those fears feel. We see her desire to overcome them, but there seems to be no solid ground for her to stand on to do so. No rock of reason. And no faith.

When Kaycee makes every effort to put one thing in front of fear and engages in haphazard prayer as a last result, she is finally able to achieve monumental results.

Brandilyn does a remarkable job of capturing palpable fear, its consuming power and debilitating responses. Most of us hope to be brave. Some of us truly are. All of us fear something or someone. Exposure exposes us to what fear is, how it feels, what it can do, and the only real remedy for it. In this life, this fallen state, it can be a constant battle to overcome.

This story is indicative of Brandilyn’s trademark: Seatbelt Suspense. You won’t be disappointed.

http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0310276438

Father, you know how hard Brandilyn works, how she gives her best to every project and endeavor she undertakes. Please bless and strengthen her as she continues to do what you have for her. Encourage her as no one else can, and fill her with your Spirit. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

Too much . . .

When the focus zeroes in on the career, the writing, the marketing, the push-push-push, hurry-hurry-hurry, work-work-work, think-think-think, go here: www.HolyDesperation.com.

Take a deep breath.

I appreciate the reasoning behind the whole writing/publishing gig. I do. It’s sound. Business requires hard work in order to turn a profit unless someone happens to cash in on a phenomenon that nets them a huge reward with little investment. If given the time, we might all be able to think of an example.

However, things change a bit—at least for me—when you insert “Christian” in front of a business title. If the business dares to claim this designation, it is implied that the owners, the operators, and the workers adhere to the moniker or its connotation. Translated it simply should mean if you choose to engage this business and its employees for services, you will encounter integrity, efforts to accomplish excellence both in workmanship and customer service, and receive adequately explained information about all aspects of what the business offers along with reasonable prices for what is provided. Right? As with Christian people in general, there are too many testimonies of this not being the case. It’s disappointing at best and a travesty at worst.

Some “Christian” professionals seem to compartmentalize their “religion” from their business practices. They choose methodology or practices which mesh with the secular approach to business/business relationships. Others give lip service to Christian principles but operate in the worldly business mode, not seeing there can be a disconnect between the two. Others mingle their faith and business as it should be, functioning together to arrive at desired goals.

Okay. Switching gears. Just a bit. If you’re a Christian who is a career person of any kind, you have to figure out how to mingle faith and business every working day. Most people who have careers have a hard time leaving work and not bringing that career home. Careers compose a huge amount of daily existence. Most people can’t flip a switch as they walk out the business door for the day or the weekend and morph into the “home” person. Usually, there is an untangling period like with a clingy child you’re trying to set down without pushing them away from you. They’re important, but they need to stop clinging.

What, or more critically: who is number one in your life? Is it Jesus? Is it really? It’s a question we must ask ourselves daily. That heavy bloodstained cross lies there in our path. Will we walk over it? Treat it as an annoying obstacle? Or pick it up and carry that monument of death which reminds us of who we really are, who we claim to be, who we need to follow? Have we died to self?

Do we follow the demands of “the man” or do we discover how to truly follow Jesus? Do we promote ourselves without conscience or do we understand how the Lord would have us progress and move forward in our work? Sometimes it won’t be easy, and like everything else of value which we’ve worked for or toward, it requires something of us. Always.

Where do we expect to see this exemplifed and practiced? In those businesses who dare to proclaim their faith as a designation of how they intend to do business. That’s where. When they don’t conduct that business with the implied qualifications and the simple—though often not without extra effort—courtesy innately required, I can’t help but wonder why they bother with the title. Maybe especially in “Christian” publishing . . .

Father, you say I am an ambassador for your Son. I need you, Holy Spirit, to guide me, to lead me into the darkness, to provide the shine of your Truth. Everywhere I go. I'm desperate for you. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

Monday Monday . . .

How 'bout a rerun?

Full Disclosure, Part Three

Sometimes when you are not in the direct glare of the light, you see things more clearly. Instead of what you’re gazing at looking all shiny or bright, you can see the details and formations of what you’re viewing with distinctions and clarity. When you think about it, almost anything can look somewhat glorious in the bright light. So looks can be deceiving.

I’m applying my little metaphor to the publishing industry, and, yes, we’re talking Christian publishing. And, no, we’re not going to tear it apart. I’ve had the opportunity, pleasure, and privilege to meet some interesting, genuine Christian professionals in this business of producing fiction both in person and via email conversations and discussions, including authors, agents, and editors. Decent, caring, and thoughtful people. Any business has its good points and its lesser qualities as far as how it’s run or how it serves its customers. Really it’s the intent of a business that ultimately speaks for how it appears in the eyes of its employees and its customers. That’s where the tale is told.

As a consumer, I am disappointed in the demand for smallish novels. The only larger novels seem to remain in some historicals, some thrillers, and some fantasies. This “demand” is from the publishers who insist that the people of today don’t want to read long novels. You could say they’re right if you talk only to those people. I’m not one of them, and I know a lot more voracious readers who don’t care for the shorter books either. Is it the cost of producing the longer novel?

As a writer, I hear the fears of multi-published authors wondering if their sales are going to be good enough to warrant another contract. These authors market, blog, have great websites, interact with readers, visit bookstores to promote their work, attend writers’ conferences, even teach classes at them. They have strong agents. Yet they become victims of “sales” or the lack thereof. If a book is not cutting it, there’s a sense of failure, and yet they’re published authors.

Soooo . . . what am I saying? Being published isn’t the end all, cure all for a writer. There’s a revolving door in the industry. Editors change jobs every so often. Authors get dropped. Demands change. Problematic speculations persist. Authors whimper in fear. Not all bright and shiny, is it?

If you’re striving to break through to the ranks of being published, best be sure your real success is solidified in pleasing the Lord. Otherwise, your so-called success in publishing might be as fleeting as a warm sun in winter.

To be continued . . .

Someday.

Father, I remain attentive to your direction. Lead me. You're the only One I want to follow. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.

Sunday's Offerings

Their feet rush into sin;
they are swift to shed innocent blood.
Their thoughts are evil thoughts;
ruin and destruction mark their ways.
The way of peace they do not know;
there is no justice in their paths.
They have turned them into crooked roads;
no one who walks in them will know peace.

. . .

For our offenses are many in your sight,
and our sins testify against us.
Our offenses are ever with us,
and we acknowledge our iniquities:
rebellion and treachery against the Lord,
turning our backs on our God,
fomenting oppression and revolt,
uttering lies our hearts have conceived.
So justice is driven back,
and righteousness stands at a distance;
truth has stumbled in the streets,
honesty cannot enter.
Truth is nowhere to be found,
and whoever shuns evil becomes a prey.

Isaiah 59:7-8; 12-15 (NIV)

Sad . . .

It's sometimes easy to set aside the fact of death when it has no immediate bearing on your life. Life and death take place all day long everyday. Sometimes it's heartwarming and sometimes it's gruesome. Rarely is the start of life sad, and the end of life happy . . . except for those who join Jesus following that last breath.

So. Present day. The world says goodbye to 70's icon and beauty Farrah Fawcett who dies of cancer at 62 years of age, and before the tears are even close to drying on the faces of her loved ones and fans, the King of Pop goes into cardiac arrest at the age of 50 years and sends more family and fans into mourning. When your number's up, the choice is no longer yours. Actually, it never was.

And, see, that's the thing. Mortality is real. It ends. Then . . .

Those who remain after the death of a loved one suffer loss. There's no getting around it, no shortcuts to the grief process. There can be relief if the loved one suffered. Seeing them released from ever-increasing pain provides some solace.

But reality requires something of us, does it not? As people, we decide our eternal fate. Believe God and turn to Jesus or die in our sins. Our choice. Sound simple? Maybe harsh? Not meant to be. The journey can be convoluted, filled with deception, lost in sin, and hard to find the right path. All along the way, God waits for the opportune moment to borrow a line from "Curse of the Black Pearl", able to redeem the worst and least of us when we're finally willing to see His perfect sacrifice on our behalf. Why He is so patient I can't say.

I know the Lord God Almighty. He saved me when I cried out to Him nearly 31 years ago. He's loved me in my foolishness, comforted me in my losses, and inspired me to follow Him and enjoy His fellowship, direction, and miraculous ways. I've lived on both sides of the spiritual realm. Jesus is the best. He brings peace to death and comfort to sorrow. And life itself is only truly found in Him.

Please comfort those who have lost loved ones, in the Name of Jesus, Amen.

Legitimate Complaints or Whining?

I do have some complaints against the publishing industry. The complaints are based on my perceptions from what I’ve gleaned in reading some of the professionals’ blogs, from listening to some of the professionals speak, and from personal conversations via emails and in person with professionals. I’ve come a long way, baby, in the evaluating process, and a few things still stink. Having said that, I only partially care.

I care because I tend to like reasonable explanations, justice for all, and the like. Outside of that, hey, I firmly believe a business is entitled to operate the way they feel will best suit their bottom line, providing they don’t forfeit their integrity in the process.

Yesterday I referred you to a valid piece from Mary E. DeMuth, and today I’m going to send you to an interesting post from Mike Duran: http://mikeduran.com/?p=3328.

Sometimes as writers we marvel at different facets of the writing community. We all have our favorite authors, books, genres. We’re amazed when some novels sell great numbers and become disappointed when others don’t. We work at our craft, construct our novels, we play by the rules or attempt to, we suck up our emotions at rejections, and we trudge on to our varied goals. We watch in surprise, admiration, bafflement, maybe nausea as our compatriots in the field rise to “stardom” or dive into obscurity.

What will it take to rock the industry? Another Shack? Another niche novel which breaks out from the mold and turns readers into marketers?

This s l o w moving machine known as royalty publishing most likely isn’t going to make any decision(s) quickly. They lumber along in a steady plod overloading CBA shelves with prairie and Amish romance novels and celebrate because precisely who they’re being written for purchased them. But what about the readers who are combing the shelves or internet outlets for adult fantasy from a Christian worldview? What the industry managed to do is to alienate that market and send them into secular stores for their “fixes” because “Adult Christian fantasy doesn’t sell well.” Okay, so it’s a niche market, and money is tight, and we don’t want to waste production time and money on something that only a few thousand readers will buy or like.

When is it time to bring the legitimate complaints to the forefront of the writing community? When do these complaints sound like whining?

There’s a lot of “bluffing” out there. “Great writing always gets published.” Guess what: Lousy writing gets published, too. “We have a great marketing team.” Guess what: “Except for new authors.” And the list goes on. But no matter: It is what it is.

I think the main thing I wanted to say is this: There are legitimate complaints being made against the publishing industry. Whether or not they’re ever noticed, acknowledged as having merit, taken to the board rooms or pub boards: Who knows?

Sometimes they just need to be brought up again. Just in case anyone who cares is listening. Or just in case anyone who can actually make changes is tuned into another point of view . . .

Father, you always hear your people—their prayers, tears, sorrows, joys, needs, praises, frustrations. All of it. Thank you for caring. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.